Talk:Graham Fraser/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AhmadLX (talk · contribs) 19:28, 9 April 2019 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this.  AhmadLX - )¯\_(ツ)_/¯) 19:28, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Earwig's. Although alot of reds are because of names of institutions or books, several sentences are copy-pasted or closely paraphrased, eg. Promotion of Linguistic Duality.The prize is given annually by the Office of the Commissioner of Official Languages to an individual or organization in Canada that is not subject to the federal Official Languages Act, but that makes a difference by promoting linguistic duality in Canada or abroad, or by contributing to the development of official language minority communities. See other instances on the report page.
 * Not enough citations; many paras and claims are uncited: last sentence in "Early life and education", section "Jounalist", 1st para of "2010 Winter Olympics", and section "Family". Also "born", "residence", in infobox unreferenced.
 * Lead is completely inadequate. It should summarize all important aspects of the article.

At present, the article seems far from GA. The above issues are what I could see from a quick overview. I will fail it, under WP:GAFAIL, for now. When these issues [copyvio fixes, enough citations, lead rewrite, links & access dates for verifiability] are addressed, it can be renominated. Thanks.  AhmadLX - )¯\_(ツ)_/¯) 21:16, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Ref [2] redirects to website's homepage. No access date given, so it is unverifiable.
 * Ref [5] is unverifiable, no link is given. Same with ref [6], [7].
 * Source [19] and infobox say he was Commissioner of Official Languages, but the lead says he is.