Talk:Gran Guerrero/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:22, 1 February 2019 (UTC)

Shall review this. MWright96 (talk) 20:22, 1 February 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
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 * 1) It is stable.
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 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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Último Guerrero Jr. (2009)

 * "Revealing that he was training for a professional wrestling career." - He revelaled
 * "in the case of Último Guerrero Jr." - in Último Guerrero Jr.'s case.
 * "it was later confirmed that there was a blood relationship between the two" - It was

Taurus (2011–2013)

 * All mentions of Jr. in this section of the article should have the comma omitted per MOS:JR
 * "Between 2010 and 2011 only occasionally wrestled matches" - Between 2010 and 2011, he only
 * "Taurus teamed up with his older brother Último Guerrero. The team-up indicated the family relationship as they competed in a for Toryumon Mexico" - competed for a Toryumon Mexico
 * "Taurus made his in-ring debut for CMLL on June 18, 2012," - Taurus made his CMLL in-ring debut
 * "where a rookie and a veteran team up." - pair up for variety?
 * "a tournament that focuses primarily on younger wrestlers or wrestlers who work in the lower ranks of the promotion," - or those who work in the promotion's lower ranks,
 * "to earn a spot in the finals the following week against Soberano, Jr." - to earn a finals spot against Soberano Jr. the following week.
 * "Taurus would team up with veteran Averno and compete in Block A" - Taurus teamed with veteran Averno and competed in Block A

Gran Guerrero (2013–present)

 * "During the celebration of Atlantis' 30th anniversary as a wrestler, Último Guerrero appeared after a match to berate Atlantis," - him
 * Delink Japanese as the country is a major geographical region
 * "initially by accidentally causing them to lose matches due to miscommunication" - to a miscommunication
 * "between Niebla Roja and Euforia and Gran Guerrero." - between Nibela Roja, Euforia and Gran Guerrero.
 * "and demanded that Niebla Roja had to come up with a new mask" - and demanded Niebla Roja to come up with a new mask
 * "followed by defeating Dragon Lee and Místico in the finals on the next day." - followed by beating Dragon Lee and Místico II in the next day's finals.
 * "Los Guerreros Lagunero ended Sky Team's 1,223-day reign with the CMLL World Trios Championship as they defeated the Sky Team" - them

Personal life

 * "It is traditional for an enmascarado to keep their private lives a secret from the wrestling fans," - to conceal their private lives from wrestling fans,

Championships and accomplishments

 * A reliable citation to the claim of FMLL Tag Team Championship (1 time) – with Último Guerrero is lacking here