Talk:Grant's Canal/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:20, 26 December 2020 (UTC)

I'll grab this one.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:20, 26 December 2020 (UTC)


 * - I'm going to be withdrawing this for now, per issues identified on the article talk page. I'm about to go on wikibreak for a week, so I won't be able to address those issues for awhile. Hog Farm Bacon 17:31, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
 * No rush, I can sit on this until whenever you're ready, so long as it's sometime before the end of January.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:21, 27 December 2020 (UTC)
 * It'll be done well before then. Hog Farm Bacon 17:29, 27 December 2020 (UTC)
 * - I've made the adjustments to this one, and I'm back online, so this one and the 13th Mo. Cavalry Regiment are ready to be reviewed when you're ready. Hog Farm Bacon 20:11, 3 January 2021 (UTC)


 * restored the river course to passing by Vicksburg awkward
 * Rephrased
 * Commanding General of the United States Army Winfield Scott This is such a long title that I think it read better if the name came first with his title set off by commas
 * Done
 * Trailing comma on Louisiana, repeatedly
 * Found and corrected several instances
 * Comma after De Soto Point
 * Added
 * infantrymen would not be released Would or could?
 * Would not. I think it's a bit out of the scope of this article, but the Union efforts against Vicksburg were hampered at times by Henry Halleck, who was mostly incompetent and had a drinking problem that rivalled Grant's.
 * promoted by the practice of both gathering drinking water and dumping raw sewage into the Mississippi River awkward
 * Done
 * 160 feet (49 m) sections hyphenate by adding |adj=on to the template
 * Done
 * making the section each--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:43, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Done.  - I think I've caught all of these. Hog Farm Talk 04:10, 19 January 2021 (UTC)