Talk:Grasshopper Scouts

January 2009
I did some editing of this page (Grasshopper Scouts), because it did not use standard English. While the original author had a command of English sufficient to convey general meaning, it was obvious that the original author is not a native English speaker. I went through and corrected several errors such as missing particles, subject-verb agreement problems, and other obvious defiencies. Some passages of the article remain somewhat vague, however, and I have not had time to look into correcting much of this. I also made only one editing pass at this article, and I am sure additional editing could improve the style and flow substantially.

Additionally, the artlcle lacks appropriate citations. These should be added.

J appleseed2 (talk) 00:58, 21 January 2009 (UTC)