Talk:Graybar Building/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 02:30, 30 March 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose ✅

2. Verifiability ✅

3. Depth of Coverage ✅

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅

7. Miscellaneous ✅

Comments
1.
 * "420-430 Lexington Avenue"- Use an endash
 * Wikilink Lexington Avenue in the site section
 * Should "the project became the Graybar Building." be "the project became known as the Graybar Building"?
 * In the portals section, you state that there were three entrance portals, but that only two of them were actually used as entrances. Either this is a contradiction, or I'm misunderstanding something.
 * Yes, there were three entrance portals, one of which was never opened to the public. epicgenius (talk) 00:57, 31 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Graybar is a duplicate link
 * " A writer for The New Yorker stated in November 1927 that the building "probably the largest something, or the highest something, or the most capacious something, in the world – but we didn’t know what"." - Ungrammatical, a change needs to occur (likely at the juncture where the direct quote starts).
 * ✅ "The building was..." epicgenius (talk) 00:57, 31 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Graybar is a duplicate link
 * " A writer for The New Yorker stated in November 1927 that the building "probably the largest something, or the highest something, or the most capacious something, in the world – but we didn’t know what"." - Ungrammatical, a change needs to occur (likely at the juncture where the direct quote starts).
 * ✅ "The building was..." epicgenius (talk) 00:57, 31 March 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ "The building was..." epicgenius (talk) 00:57, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

2.
 * Stuff in infobox not cited in the article: Art Deco, address, engineer, NYCL reference no.
 * Is "Bookworm History" reliable? It looks a touch blog-ish
 * ✅ Removed it.
 * City Room ref gives me a 503 error
 * That is weird. It works fine for me. Though sometimes this site has periodic outages. epicgenius (talk) 00:57, 31 March 2020 (UTC)
 * The Grand Central Directory (ref 58) is a 404 deadlink
 * The New Yorker "Rats" ref should have a subscription required parameter
 * The New Yorker "Rats" ref should have a subscription required parameter
 * The New Yorker "Rats" ref should have a subscription required parameter

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7.
 * Trumbull is redlinked down in the Portals section, but he's first mentioned up in the Planning and Construction section. If the redlinks are kept, they should be at the first mention

That's it,. Hog Farm (talk) 00:16, 31 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. I have fixed all of these. epicgenius (talk) 00:57, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 01:33, 31 March 2020 (UTC)