Talk:Great Barrington, Massachusetts/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TheSpecialUser (talk · contribs) 10:28, 24 August 2012 (UTC)

I fear, I've to quickly fail this. I'm sorry but this article is not near to GA status and issues can't be fixed within a month or some so failing it. Here is an brief explanation of the problems:


 * Refs - Majority of them are WP:Bare URLs and some are unreliable sources which makes this eligible for a quick fail
 * Unref - Large amounts of facts are unreferenced and needs WP:RS using WP:Citing sources
 * Lead - per WP:LEAD, it should summarize the article and should be neutral which it is not
 * Neutrality - There are WP:PEACOCK terms in the article as well as few statements are not neutral.
 * Images - They look awkward and caption needs to improved as well as needs WP:ALT
 * MoS - There are many small paras and in the way they are, are not proper. The structure of the article is little too poor
 * Incomplete - There is a lot of info that can be added to the topic thus this is an incomplete article
 * Phrase - It needs throughout copyediting.

 TheSpecialUser TSU 07:22, 27 August 2012 (UTC)