Talk:Great Lakes/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HeyJude70 (talk · contribs) 15:15, 11 January 2017 (UTC)

Clarification
HeyJude70 -- can you clarify what you are looking for? The Great Lakes are enclosed in the redish box in the picture. Dolotta (talk) 23:44, 12 January 2017 (UTC)
 * I fixed the picture - before, it was just a map of North America without the box. Phil  roc My contribs 23:01, 13 January 2017 (UTC)

Comments
I have not looked at all the sources but 7 and 8 do not seem like very good sources. I also think a good copy-edit would help, perhaps from the guild of copyeditors. Some sections seem choppy. Other issues that need to be looked at include coverage balance and due weight. Alanscottwalker (talk) 14:32, 13 January 2017 (UTC)

The referencing needs work. There are 6 citation needed tags in the article. All non-obvious facts need references. The subsections "Primary connecting waterways," "Flora," "Shipping," and "Drinking waters" are unreferenced and there are several paragraphs throughout without any references. I also agree with the comments from. I do not think this article currently meets the Good Article criteria. Knope7 (talk) 01:39, 14 January 2017 (UTC)

I have re-reviewed this, and there were obviously some issues I missed with the page. I have updated the review to reflect this, as well as including the corrections made. At this time, I believe that the page may not be eligible to pass the Good Page criteria. ThomDevexx ॐ (talk) 08:38, 15 January 2017 (UTC)