Talk:Great Moments in Aviation/GA1

GA Review
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Great work on the article! I couldn't find any major issues with it, but here are a few comments/questions: I'll put the article on hold for seven days so that you can fix this. Good luck! :)  The Le ft orium  13:35, 10 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Caribbean should be linked in the lead ✅
 * Can you split up the lead paragraph? It's a bit long. ✅
 * becoming a pilot - inspired by her – Use an emdash instead of a hyphen. ✅
 * which lead the BBC to approve the film so easily – which lead the British Broadcasting Corporation (BBC) to approve the film so easily ✅


 * That should be everything taken care of - many thanks for your review and comments! Frickative  16:16, 11 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Well done! I will pass the article now.  The Le ft orium  16:19, 11 May 2009 (UTC)