Talk:Greece–Turkey relations/GA3

GA Review
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Reviewer: AirshipJungleman29 (talk · contribs) 01:15, 29 September 2022 (UTC)

I will take this review. AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 01:15, 29 September 2022 (UTC)


 * Fantastic! It has already gone through one extensive review with @MrLinkinPark333. He declined to approve it further because he did not want to go through all the sources. (Which admittedly, are quite a lot -- I had to split the page because the content is so overwhelming.) I will say I not only went through nearly every source earlier this year, but I added a lot of new ones so feel confident that 98% are in good shape. Elias (talk) 02:28, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
 * A good start would be fixing the CS1 and CS1 maintenance errors. These are on citations 8, 28, 124, 151, 166, 170, 219, 225, 228, and 231, in addition to the first and fourth books in the further reading section. When this is done, I will review the sources via a spot-check of randomly chosen citations.

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it well written?
 * A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
 * There are numerous missed punctuation marks (full stops are particularly prominent), while the prose is exceedingly informal and essay-like.
 * B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
 * Specifically, it does not comply with the guidelines of lead sections and words to watch.
 * 1) Is it verifiable with no original research?
 * A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
 * B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons&mdash;science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:
 * C. It contains no original research:
 * D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
 * B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
 * See previous Good Article review for details.
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
 * 1) Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * I cannot say that the issues raised at the previous nomination have been adequately considered. When the previous reviewer brought up the question of neutrality, especially in the contemporary history section, the nominator explained that the section was based on a writing project, but thought the problem fixed after correcting three (3!) sentences. The entire section needs a complete rewrite, especially as it often misses basic punctuation such as full stops or apostrophes, or basic grammar. There are in addition multiple occasions where sentences are overly cited, large numbers of WP:WTW, and issues with WP:NPOV and WP:IMPARTIAL. I cannot do anything but quick-fail this article, on the basis that it fails criteria 3 and 5 of the Good Article quickfail criteria. I would suggest a visit to the Guild of Copy Editors, if you find yourself unable to improve the article satisfactorily. AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:24, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * I cannot say that the issues raised at the previous nomination have been adequately considered. When the previous reviewer brought up the question of neutrality, especially in the contemporary history section, the nominator explained that the section was based on a writing project, but thought the problem fixed after correcting three (3!) sentences. The entire section needs a complete rewrite, especially as it often misses basic punctuation such as full stops or apostrophes, or basic grammar. There are in addition multiple occasions where sentences are overly cited, large numbers of WP:WTW, and issues with WP:NPOV and WP:IMPARTIAL. I cannot do anything but quick-fail this article, on the basis that it fails criteria 3 and 5 of the Good Article quickfail criteria. I would suggest a visit to the Guild of Copy Editors, if you find yourself unable to improve the article satisfactorily. AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:24, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * I cannot say that the issues raised at the previous nomination have been adequately considered. When the previous reviewer brought up the question of neutrality, especially in the contemporary history section, the nominator explained that the section was based on a writing project, but thought the problem fixed after correcting three (3!) sentences. The entire section needs a complete rewrite, especially as it often misses basic punctuation such as full stops or apostrophes, or basic grammar. There are in addition multiple occasions where sentences are overly cited, large numbers of WP:WTW, and issues with WP:NPOV and WP:IMPARTIAL. I cannot do anything but quick-fail this article, on the basis that it fails criteria 3 and 5 of the Good Article quickfail criteria. I would suggest a visit to the Guild of Copy Editors, if you find yourself unable to improve the article satisfactorily. AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:24, 29 September 2022 (UTC)