Talk:Greece in the Eurovision Song Contest 2013/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 20:22, 8 September 2022 (UTC)

Since you have a lot of Greece articles in the queue, I will review this tomorrow! --K. Peake 20:22, 8 September 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Remove wikilink on Elias Kozas
 * Remove Greek national television broadcaster introduction to Hellenic Broadcasting Corporation since this being solely in the body is sufficient
 * "by private music channel" → "by a private music channel,"
 * "on the group's album, which was" → "on the band's debut studio album, Keep up the Rhythm, which was"
 * "the Netherlands, and Germany," → "the Netherlands and Germany,"
 * "was awarded sixth place" → "the country was awarded sixth place"
 * ✅ Grk1011 (talk) 12:00, 11 September 2022 (UTC)

Background

 * Pipe 2013 contest to Eurovision Song Contest 2013
 * Where is it sourced that all 12 points were from Cyprus?
 * [4] does not back up most of the info it is used to source
 * "A departure from this method was a reality" → "In 2004, this method was departed from for many months with a reality"
 * Pipe Idol to Idol (franchise)
 * "series that ran for many months in 2004, ultimately being scrapped." → "which was scrapped." removing the first part from this area since it should have been mentioned earlier in the sentence but keeping the comma
 * ✅. Fixed the wording of the 2004 part differently because it wasn't that it departed for months, it was that the show ran for several months. Grk1011 (talk) 02:13, 14 September 2022 (UTC)

Before Eurovision

 * "Greece was facing." → "the nation was facing."
 * "and the difficulty said costs" → "and the difficulty those costs"
 * "the ongoing finical crisis." → "the ongoing financial crisis."
 * Add (EBU) in brackets
 * ✅ Grk1011 (talk) 12:00, 11 September 2022 (UTC)

Eurosong 2013 – a MAD show

 * Most of the first two sentences are not sourced
 * Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2013
 * Remove overly obvious wikilink on Athens
 * "on ET1, ERT World," → "on ET1 and ERT World," with the pipe
 * Adjusted this slightly differently for better flow. Grk1011 (talk) 15:55, 12 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Remove wikilink on Cyprus
 * The website name of ert.gr is not sourced
 * That's where the linked text "ERT webcast" goes to. Grk1011 (talk) 15:55, 12 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Where is the 1.07 million figure sourced?
 * That was a typo, it's 1.04 million, the "ΤΜΛ (000)" column. Grk1011 (talk) 15:55, 12 September 2022 (UTC)
 * "on 7 February, 2013," → "on 7 February 2013,"
 * Pipe OTE TV to Cosmote TV
 * "to Eurovision coverage, and" → "to Eurovision coverage and"
 * ✅ with comments above. Grk1011 (talk) 15:55, 12 September 2022 (UTC)

Competing entries

 * Where is it sourced that the presentations were at a press conference in Greece?
 * Remove wikilink on Elias Kozas
 * ✅ Grk1011 (talk) 15:55, 12 September 2022 (UTC)

Final

 * Img looks good!
 * Where is the 50/50 combination sourced?
 * Pipe televote to Televoting
 * The first sentence of the second para is not sourced
 * Marija Serifovic → Marija Šerifović with the wikilink
 * "with Eleni Foureira, and" → "with Eleni Foureira and"
 * Despina Olympiou's performance is not sourced
 * Remove pipe on ET1
 * Remove wikilink on ERT World
 * Remove pipe on RIK
 * Remove wikilink on Cyprus
 * Remove wikilink on YouTube
 * "on 18 February with" → "on 18 February 2013, with"
 * "throughout the duration of the show." → "throughout the duration."
 * ✅ Grk1011 (talk) 02:13, 14 September 2022 (UTC)

Promotion

 * "on the band's studio album" → "on the band's debut studio album"
 * "on 22 March" →"on 22 March 2013"
 * "of their journey," → "of Koza Mostra's journey,"
 * "Wiwibloggs, and eurovision.tv." → "Wiwibloggs and eurovision.tv."
 * ✅, it's a bit wordy with "Koza Mostra and Iakovidis" each time since he is not a member of the band but more like a featured artist in a sense. Grk1011 (talk) 12:00, 11 September 2022 (UTC)

At Eurovision

 * Img looks good!
 * Malmö Arena, 14 and 18 May are not sourced
 * "prior to their performance" → "prior to Koza Mostra's performance"
 * "and the final on" → "and the final broadcast on"
 * ✅ The Malmo Arena and 14 and 18 May are on the left panel of the page linked in the ref at the end of the sentences. Added a sentence about a missing performer. Grk1011 (talk) 12:00, 11 September 2022 (UTC)

Performances

 * Pipe ukelele to Ukulele
 * ✅ Grk1011 (talk) 12:00, 11 September 2022 (UTC)

Voting

 * [47] is only for the final points awarded to Azerbaijan
 * ✅ Grk1011 (talk) 12:00, 11 September 2022 (UTC)

Points awarded to Greece

 * Good

Points awarded by Greece

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; my first review for you in a while! --K. Peake 09:23, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
 * I've addressed most of your comments with a few comments of my own listed above. Thanks for the review and sorry for the slower than usual responses from me! Grk1011 (talk) 02:13, 14 September 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, did some brief copy editing but good job from you! --K. Peake 07:50, 14 September 2022 (UTC)