Talk:Greece in the Eurovision Song Contest 2017/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Onegreatjoke (talk · contribs) 16:30, 10 May 2023 (UTC)

Hello! I'm Onegreatjoke and i'm here to review another one of your nominations. Comments will come tomorrow. Onegreatjoke (talk) 16:30, 10 May 2023 (UTC)
 * Prose has been addressed and spotchecks are all clear. passing! Onegreatjoke (talk) 19:14, 26 May 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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 * Pass/fail:
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 * Pass/fail:
 * Pass/fail:

Prose
Background Artist Selection Ellinikós Telikós 2017 Preparations and promotion At Eurovision Performances Voting That seems to be all for prose! Onegreatjoke (talk) 18:07, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
 * "by the renaming of NERIT as ERT" Should it be the "by renaming NERIT to ERT" or something similar because that seems weirdly worded.
 * "Previously the broadcaster had said that they would select the entry internally, however they reconsidered, seeing Ellinikós Telikós, the Greek selection event, as a revenue source." I feel like it should either be "...entry internally, however, they reconsidered," or "...entry internally. However, they reconsidered,"
 * "...with her song to be selected though a three-song national final." should be through.
 * "was televised on ERT1, ERT HD and ERT World as well as" should be a comma after ERT HD.
 * "Former Eurovision contestants Sergey Lazarev, Helena Paparizou, Ani Lorak and Sakis Rouvas also appeared on screen" comma after Ani Lorak.
 * "final version of the song and its accompanying music video were revealed on 13 March" feel like 'was' is a better thing to say there than were.
 * "promoted the song throughout Sweden, Norway, Denmark and Finland." comma after Denmark.
 * "(France, Germany, Italy, Spain and the United Kingdom)" comma after Spain.
 * "were televised in Greece on ERT1, ERT HD and ERT World" Comma after ERT HD.
 * "featured Demy standing on a leveled podium and a hologram screen which appeared in front of the singer" I feel that it would be better to replace 'which' with 'that'.
 * "Demy was joined by three off-stage backing vocalists: Erasmia Markidi, Evgenia Liakou and Paris Paraskevadis-Planets." comma after Evgenia Liakou.
 * "two sets of points from 1-8, 10 and 12:" comma after 10.
 * "and the overall impression by the act." I think 'by' should be replaced with 'of'.
 * "Vicky Gerotheodorou (jury chairperson), Xenia Ghali, Dimitris Ouggarezos [el], Akis Anastasiadis and Aris Petrakis." comma after Akis Anastasiadis.
 * the above have been addressed. Grk1011 (talk) 01:28, 15 May 2023 (UTC)
 * checking in just in case this fell off your radar. Grk1011 (talk) 02:23, 26 May 2023 (UTC)
 * I'll see if I can work on this tomorrow. Onegreatjoke (talk) 02:24, 26 May 2023 (UTC)

Spotchecks

 * [1] looks good.
 * [8] looks good.
 * [9] looks good.
 * [10] looks good.
 * [14 and 15] Looks good.
 * [18 and 19] looks good.
 * [27 and 28] looks good.
 * [47] looks good.
 * [44] looks good.

Spotchecks look alright Onegreatjoke (talk) 19:11, 26 May 2023 (UTC)