Talk:Greece in the Eurovision Song Contest 2020/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 11:11, 22 April 2020 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020.
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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Lead

 * "which was to be held in Rotterdam, Netherlands." - a word missing between the words "was" and "to" can be either scheduled or due
 * "ERT has stated Stefania will instead represent Greece at the 2021 Contest." - the word in bold does not need to start with a capital letter

Background

 * "Following the introduction of semi-finals for the 2004," - 2004 contest
 * Wikilink 2018 contest to the relevant article and the year 2019 to Eurovision Song Contest 2019
 * The final two sentences of the first paragraph lack reliable source(s)
 * resulting in the renaming of NERIT to ERT; ERT began broadcasting once again on 11 June 2015." - Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this
 * "The Greek broadcaster has used various methods to select the Greek entry in the past," - nation's
 * The entire third paragraph in this section requires reliable source(s) to verify the information contained within it
 * "From 2010 through 2017," - sounds awfully AmEng, how about to?

Internal selection

 * "the Hellenic Broadcasting Corporation (ERT) announced" - the full name isn't needed since it is mentioned in the previous subsection; just the mention of the acryonms will suffice

At Eurovision

 * "On 28 January 2020, the allocation draw was held," - how about adding where exactly the allocation draw was held?
 * "Fokas Evangelinos was hired to organize" - should be organise since it is a European contest
 * "choreography for the performance.[11][2]" - refs in numerical order please
 * "with Stefania for the next contest in 2021." - Wikilink the text in bold to Eurovision Song Contest 2021

Alternative song contests

 * "Austria's ORF aired" - broadcast is more formal
 * "the best-placed in each semi-final advanced to the final round." - best-placed entry or best-placed country