Talk:Greek destroyer Lonchi (1907)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 19:37, 7 September 2013 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:37, 7 September 2013 (UTC)

Ping--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:13, 20 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Image needs a source and the appropriate Greek PD tag.
 * Delete the ship's stats from the lede; they're needless duplication of what's in the main body.
 * "Thyella class ships/destroyer" should be hyphenated as Thyella class is a compound adjective for the noun.
 * Measurements in the main body and in infobox should match.
 * Link Hotchkiss gun, broken up, torpedo tubes
 * Correct Hydra-class battleships to Hydra-class ironclads.
 * Tell the reader where Mudros Bay is (what island).
 * The lede says that Lonchi was back in Greek colors by 1918, but that's not what the main body says.
 * This is awkward: was pushed into heavy service patrolling the eastern Mediterranean and in support of land operations.
 * This is passive voice: Operations came to a close. How about "Operations ended"
 * Duplicate link to Ottoman Empire.
 * No DABs.

Failed as non-responsive.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:51, 4 October 2013 (UTC)