Talk:Greek heraldry

In dire need of a rewrite
Hello,

I was very confused reading through this article. I feel that it falls far short of usual Wikipedia standards, and - though I don't feel that I personally know enough about the subject to rewrite it myself - it desperately needs someone to tackle it. The first section is not cited at all, beyond 'there is a blazon contained somewhere within the text of this Aeschylus play, we promise,' and everything after that seems a complete waste of space with no perceivable link to the subject of heraldry in Greece. Instead it appears to be an incredibly confusingly written definition of heraldry itself. I would suggest either scrapping the whole thing or at least excising those last couple paragraphs before the 'Greek Heraldric Society' section - though the need for this is questionable as well, as it reads more like an advertisement than an encyclopedia entry.

Sincerely, OliviaSp — Preceding unsigned comment added by OliviaSp (talk • contribs) 20:29, 27 October 2013 (UTC)