Talk:Green Arrow (Arrow episode)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:48, 10 February 2020 (UTC)

Comments
 * "the fourth-season premiere " hyphenation reads odd to me, perhaps "the premiere of the fourth season"?
 * ✅ AutumnKing (talk) 13:00, 20 February 2020 (UTC)


 * "Felicity Smoak, (Emily Bett Rickards). " only just struck me but are commas around parentheses with actor names commonplace in such articles? It looks okay I guess mid-sentence, but it looks particularly peculiar to me in this kind of instance, at the end of a sentence. NB, you don't seem to be consistent, e.g. " of Laurel Lance (Katie Cassidy) and Thea Queen (Willa Holland) "....
 * I have removed commas for consistency AutumnKing (talk) 13:00, 20 February 2020 (UTC)


 * "on October 7, 2015 on" comma after 2015.
 * ✅ AutumnKing (talk) 13:00, 20 February 2020 (UTC)


 * " season three finale" sea of blue, could rephrase as "finale of season three".
 * ✅ AutumnKing (talk) 13:00, 20 February 2020 (UTC)


 * Where is production code referenced?
 * ✅ AutumnKing (talk) 13:00, 20 February 2020 (UTC)


 * In development, you link "season three finale" twice, to different things, and have a different linking to that in the lead as well...!
 * I have removed the second link in development, and added in link to whole season at season as a whole instead. AutumnKing (talk) 13:00, 20 February 2020 (UTC)


 * "would be titled "Green Arrow and that..." missing a closing quote mark somewhere here!
 * ✅ AutumnKing (talk) 13:00, 20 February 2020 (UTC)


 * "July 23 2015" comma after 23.
 * ✅ AutumnKing (talk) 13:00, 20 February 2020 (UTC)


 * "statement". [22] " remove space before ref.
 * ✅ AutumnKing (talk) 13:00, 20 February 2020 (UTC)


 * Screenrant appears to be called Screen Rant according to our article.
 * ✅ AutumnKing (talk) 13:00, 20 February 2020 (UTC)


 * Ref 19 has a spaced hyphen, should be an en-dash.
 * ✅ AutumnKing (talk) 13:00, 20 February 2020 (UTC)

That's it for a quick run. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 13:42, 17 February 2020 (UTC)
 * I have been through and corrected those. Please let me know if there is anything else I should look at. Many thanks. AutumnKing (talk) 13:00, 20 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Hey, I'm content with the changes made, and so I'll promote to GA, good work. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 08:42, 24 February 2020 (UTC)