Talk:Green Bay Packers Foundation/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 11:50, 21 September 2018 (UTC)

I'll have a look at this, should be pretty quick with the review. Kosack (talk) 11:50, 21 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks ! Appreciate the review. I should be pretty available this weekend to address any comments. Cheers, « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 14:45, 21 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Note that I did some reference clean-up after perusing the article once more. « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 14:58, 21 September 2018 (UTC)

Initial review

Lead

 * No issues.

History

 * The placement of ref 1 seems slightly odd, being placed simply after Pairns' name with no real information. Perhaps move it further down?
 * Is there any expansion potential for this section? Seems a little short as a history section, notable former board members perhaps? The foundation's record donation could be worth including.

Organization

 * I would link 501(c)(3) organization in the opening sentence of this section. Although it's linked in the lead, it's an unusual thing and we shouldn't expect the reader to have to scroll back to find the meaning. WP:OVERLINK allows one linked mention after the lead also.

Images

 * Manual of Style/Captions would encourage links in picture captions. Lambeau Field and the Packers links could be included here.