Talk:Green Lantern (Six Flags Great Adventure)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:16, 21 July 2013 (UTC)

Comments The Rambling Man (talk) 19:05, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Infobox has inconsistent commas for 1000s (or 1,000s).
 * One very short para for the lead could be improved, it's supposed to summarise the article - my rule of thumb: check it against the table of contents, have you summarised the article in the lead?
 * "Bolliger & Mabillard stand-up roller coaster" three links without unlinked words between is confusing to a reader. It's a hard call but can you rephrase it?
 * Is there a suitable link for "inversions" for non-expert readers?
 * "About 1999, its track " -> "Around 1999, its..."
 * " early 2006" hyphen.
 * "track returned to its " perhaps "track was returned" as it didn't do it itself.
 * "(as confirmed by local media)" is that needed?
 * Don't overlink Six Flags.
 * What is "zoning approval"?
 * "The ride is located ..." reiterate the name.
 * What is B&M?
 * Link Riddler's Revenge first time round.
 * " peaked at #47" avoid hash for number per WP:HASH. Check others.
 * Don't SHOUT in the refs.
 * Check refs for correct use of en-dash in the title fields.

GAN criteria

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Not far from decent, so I'll put it on hold for seven days. Let me know when you're ready for a re-assessment. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:05, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Several comments above to be addressed.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I believe I have addressed all the issues. Themeparkgc   Talk  00:01, 23 July 2013 (UTC)