Talk:Greenwich Savings Bank Building/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

 * Add alt text to every image.
 * "worth while" "worthwhile" MOS:SIC
 * Add a hyphen between "Corinthian style".
 * Remove the comma after "Broadway facade".
 * "different to that" "different from that"
 * "as hexagonal lantern" "as a hexagonal lantern"
 * "a coffered ceilings" "coffered ceilings" or "a coffered ceiling"
 * "and plaster ceiling" "and a plaster ceiling"
 * Add a hyphen between "second largest" (both times).
 * "During early 1921" "In early 1921"
 * "at a cost of" "for" (less wordy)
 * "including as an auditorium" - is "as" necessary?
 * "renamed the structure as" "renamed the structure"
 * "U.S. president Barack Obama" "U.S. President Barack Obama"

Progress

 * Thanks, I have done these. Epicgenius (talk) 17:06, 6 July 2021 (UTC)