Talk:Greenwood railway station/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 03:47, 25 April 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 04:26, 25 April 2024 (UTC)

Hi I'll take this since I've lived in Perth ever since!  750h+ &#124;  Talk  04:26, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Nice! That's the quickest I've ever received a review. Steelkamp (talk) 04:28, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Haha, I'll begin reviewing this shortly.  750h+ &#124;   Talk  04:30, 25 April 2024 (UTC)

Lead
Those are my lead concerns,   750h+ &#124;   Talk  04:38, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
 * After several promises by the state government during the 1990s to build the station, a A$6.8 million... It should be "an A$6.8", not "a A$6.8"
 * It should be "a A$6.8 million", because it is read out loud as "a six point eight million Australian dollar...
 * ...million contract was awarded to John... Is "awarded" the right word? Wouldn't "granted" sound better?
 * Awarded is a common term used in contracting, and the sources use that term. See Contract awarding also.
 * May just be personal preference, but wouldn't "five-minute frequency" and "fifteen-minute frequency" look better than "five minute frequency" and "fifteen minute frequency"
 * I agree. I always forget which one is correct, so I had to check a previous GA review. Steelkamp (talk) 05:39, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
 * In the infobox, "Public Transport Authority" shouldn't be linked twice.
 * Removed one.

Description
No other problems.  750h+ &#124;  Talk  05:10, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
 * It consists of a series of bicycles which were... "Which" should be changed to "that".
 * Done.

History
Nothing else from me.  750h+ &#124;  Talk  05:15, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
 * ...was extended north at a cost of $1.8 million... change "at a cost of" to "for" for conciseness.
 * Done.
 * Prior to the shelter extension... Change "Prior to" to "Before" for conciseness.
 * Done.
 * I don't think "shelted" is a real word. Maybe you meant "sheltered"?
 * Done.
 * Change "percent" to "percent" (Australian English).
 * I believe either spelling is correct.

Services

 * for a five minute frequency in total change five minute to five-minute, as said above.
 * Done.
 * From it's opening change "it's" to "its".
 * Done.

Image check

 * Images are fine, all have alt text and are appropriately licensed. Image review passed.  750h+ &#124;   Talk  05:19, 25 April 2024 (UTC)

Source check
To start soon.
 * 2 OK, shows the map.
 * 6 and 7 OK.
 * 13 OK.
 * 18 OK, couldn't check 17.
 * 23 and 24 OK.
 * 33 OK
 * 39 OK
 * Just asking,, in the Services section's first paragraph, why isn't there a reference?  750h+ &#124;   Talk  05:24, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
 * There weren't any references there because I forgot to add them, lol. That should be everything addressed now. Thanks, Steelkamp (talk) 05:39, 25 April 2024 (UTC)

Verdict

 * With all my concerns addressed, I am now happy to pass this article for Good Article status. Well done!  750h+ &#124;   Talk  05:47, 25 April 2024 (UTC)