Talk:Gregory Helms/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  01:40, 17 November 2009 (UTC) Overall this is a nice article. Nice to see good quality since I like The Hurricane. Anyway, here's some issues I've found:
 * "He later brought back The Hurricane character, and appeared as both Gregory Helms and The Hurricane on ECW." I presume this should be present tense but I could be wrong.
 * I think it works as either, but it makes more sense to have it present tense so I've reworded it. ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 13:18, 17 November 2009 (UTC)
 * "He won his first championship shortly afterwards, by defeating "Playboy" T.C. Cruise to become the SWA Light Heavyweight Champion." What's the SWA? Note it. Same for SCW in the first paragraph.
 * Done. ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 13:18, 17 November 2009 (UTC)
 * "They also wrestled each other in a number one contendership ladder match at Starrcade, in which both Moore and Helms grabbed the contract at the same time." For what title? I presume cruiserweight.
 * Done. ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 13:18, 17 November 2009 (UTC)
 * "He made his return to the SmackDown! brand in February 2006, to start a feud with Nunzio, Kid Kash and the other cruiserweights." Was he automatically moved due to winning the title, or something else? Clarify.
 * Clarified. ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 13:18, 17 November 2009 (UTC)
 * "Helms went on to feud with Jimmy Wang Yang over the Cruiserweight Title, after a tag team match where Hardy and Yang defeated Helms and Sylvan." Which Hardy?
 * Done. ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 13:18, 17 November 2009 (UTC)

I'll put this on hold and pass upon completion. Wizardman 01:40, 17 November 2009 (UTC)
 * I believe I've gotten eveything. Thanks for the review. ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 13:18, 17 November 2009 (UTC)
 * No problem. Looks good now so article passed. Wizardman  16:34, 17 November 2009 (UTC)