Talk:Grevillea juniperina/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:48, 27 March 2015 (UTC)

More than pleased to take up this review. Of course, you have improved the article awesomely, but I have a few suggestions:
 * Robert Brown once linked in the lead need not be linked again afterwards. Same for inflorescence
 * hmm, not sure about this - tradition has been to link once in lead and once in body - the MOS on linking does not confirm this however. Have been doing it this way for (probably) 50 FAs so far Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:04, 27 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Perhaps Grevillea juniperina can be abbreviated as G. juniperina at some places.
 * abbreviated some that do not begin a sentence Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:04, 27 March 2015 (UTC)


 * In Description, ...though occasionally arise... --> ...though they occasionally arise...
 * done Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:04, 27 March 2015 (UTC)


 * The spider-like flowers are red, pink, orange, yellow or greenish, and are mostly terminal—arising on the ends of stems—though occasionally arise from axillary buds. They are 2.5–3.5 cm (1–1 3⁄8 in) long. The spider-flower arrangement of the inflorescence has several individual flowers emerging from a central rounded flower head—reminiscent of the legs of a spider. Perhaps the latter sentence should precede the former one, the reader would primarily like to know why they are called d spider-like.
 * flipped Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:04, 27 March 2015 (UTC)


 * ...and releases 1–2 seeds when ripe... According to MOS,one to two seeds would read better.
 * done Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:04, 27 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Conversion templates required towards the end of "Description".
 * added Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:04, 27 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Who is Don MacGillivray? Provide a link or give their identity.
 * linked Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:06, 27 March 2015 (UTC)


 * G. juniperina subsp. allojohnsonii  According to what I have seen elsewhere, may be you could also write G. j. allojohnsonii? See for instances throughout the text. Not sure if it applies to plant species.
 * A better way of presentation: G. juniperina subsp. fortis Makinson --> G. j. fortis Makinson ; G. juniperina subsp. sulphurea (A.Cunn.) Makinson (formerly var. trinervata) -->G. juniperina subsp. sulphurea (A.Cunn.) Makinson (formerly var. trinervata) Can you also add the years in which they were named?
 * I've put the small authorities in - am not so sure about putting the dates after commas in body of text. Have put a note explaing they were all ratified in 2000. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 13:03, 27 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Link alluvial, eucalypt, woodland, hybrid
 * done Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:04, 27 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Intervals of 10 to 15 years between fires are thought to be... sounds a bit vague.
 * the vagueness reflects that we think this is the case but do not know conclusively that it's true Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:04, 27 March 2015 (UTC)


 * ...negatively impact on its growth... remove "on"
 * done Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:04, 27 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Could you explain more on the negative impact boxthorn has on the juniper?
 * inhibits its spread - added last word... Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:04, 27 March 2015 (UTC)

Cheers! Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Talk all words 09:48, 27 March 2015 (UTC)
 * I feel all the issues have been resolved. This is quite ready for the GA status. Congrats! Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Talk all words 16:18, 27 March 2015 (UTC)