Talk:Griffon (roller coaster)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:41, 30 August 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * Lead too short, doesn't summarise the whole article per WP:LEAD.
 * ✅-- Dom497 ( talk ) 20:35, 19 September 2013 (UTC)


 * Is it Griffon or Griffon? (Suggest you apply these common fixes to all the GANs you have nominated)
 * This looks consistent to me...can't find anything wrong.-- Dom497 ( talk ) 19:07, 13 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Article title. Intro of article.  That's just the first two instances... The Rambling Man (talk) 19:39, 13 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Well, Apollo's Chariot, Nemesis (roller coaster), Batman: The Ride, Air (roller coaster), Green Lantern Coaster, Scream (roller coaster) all are like Griffon (and those are just a few articles).-- Dom497 ( talk ) 20:31, 13 September 2013 (UTC)
 * I don't get your point. Is it italicised or not?  Be consistent.  It's somewhat irrelevant what "other" articles do.  The Rambling Man (talk) 09:51, 14 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Not worth discussing it...I have removed the italics.-- Dom497 ( talk ) 20:10, 19 September 2013 (UTC)


 * Link Dive Coaster in the lead.
 * It already is at the very beginning.-- Dom497 ( talk ) 19:07, 13 September 2013 (UTC)


 * "opening date.[7][6]" numerical order please.
 * -- Dom497 ( talk ) 19:07, 13 September 2013 (UTC)


 * "restraint with a seatbelt.[14][7][16] " ditto.
 * -- Dom497 ( talk ) 19:07, 13 September 2013 (UTC)


 * "One of Griffon's trains passing through the splashdown element." incomplete sentences in captions don't need a full stop.
 * -- Dom497 ( talk ) 19:07, 13 September 2013 (UTC)


 * Should "Build It Bigger" be in italics like normal TV shows?
 * -- Dom497 ( talk ) 19:07, 13 September 2013 (UTC)


 * Use Floorless coaster in the article rather than have it as a See also.
 * ✅-- Dom497 ( talk ) 19:09, 13 September 2013 (UTC)


 * Check refs for en-dash, e.g. ref 32 title needs one.
 * ✅...I think.-- Dom497 ( talk ) 20:18, 19 September 2013 (UTC)


 * Category calls it a "hypercoaster" but this isn't covered at all in the article.
 * This has to do with the infobox coding but I have no idea how to remove it. any help?-- Dom497  ( talk ) 20:07, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * The infobox automatically categorises roller coasters which are between 200 and 299 ft as hypercoasters per the main article. We could add a parameter to disable that categorisation when set, if you need to. Themeparkgc   Talk  06:25, 20 September 2013 (UTC)
 * It's a little dangerous to have auto-categorising infoboxes, for this very reason. I have no idea what a hypercoaster is, and it's not mentioned in the article at all, so it's a surprise to me (and probably other readers) that it should be categorised as such without it being included.  The Rambling Man (talk) 16:12, 24 September 2013 (UTC)
 * I've added the parameter as an interim measure so the category does not appear on this article. A wider discussion will need to take place prior to the removal of the categorisation to other articles. I'll start this at a later date. Themeparkgc   Talk  02:09, 25 September 2013 (UTC)


 * " wwwCOASTERFORCEcom/YouTube." what?
 * -- Dom497 ( talk ) 19:07, 13 September 2013 (UTC)


 * Ref 12, where does Daily Press come from?
 * ✅-- Dom497 ( talk ) 19:07, 13 September 2013 (UTC)

I'll put it on hold for a week. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:07, 13 September 2013 (UTC)

Sorry I took so long...I've been getting lots of homework. Anyway, I have addressed all your comments. :) -- Dom497 ( talk ) 20:18, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Lead is still too short. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:21, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Whoops, missed that point. I'm on it!-- Dom497 ( talk ) 20:27, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * How about now?-- Dom497 ( talk ) 20:35, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Better, a comment above.... The Rambling Man (talk) 16:12, 24 September 2013 (UTC)