Talk:Grift of the Magi/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 01:03, 8 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Lede
 * Link animated
 * Link sitcom
 * Only Fox should be linked, not network
 * Link to Fox Broadcasting Company, not Fox network
 * Add actor for Fat Tony
 * Add actor for Skinner
 * Add actor for Bart
 * Add actor for Lisa


 * Plot
 * Add actors for various. Example: Bart's actor is missing
 * No other Simpsons episode articles list the actors. And since it's not required by any policy I don't think the actors should be added in this article either. Theleftorium (talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Production
 * Unlink showrunner per WP:OVERLINK
 * This is not a common term. "animated" and "sitcom" are far more common. Theleftorium (talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Release
 * Only Fox should be linked, not network
 * Link to Fox Broadcasting Company, not Fox network
 * ABC should be American Broadcasting Company (ABC) per MOS:ACRO
 * Add its first mention, it should only show the last name for "Mike Scully" which should be "Scully", etc.
 * "Actor" is not needed in that image
 * Perhaps move the image to the left, as there is already one directly above it
 * I'd prefer not. See second paragraph of Images. Theleftorium (talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)


 * References
 * Ref. 2: That - should be an en-dash as per WP:DASH
 * Ref. 2: Yahoo! is the publisher, and Yahoo! TV is the work
 * Ref. 4: Is missing publisher (Internet Brands)
 * Since when is this needed? See Cite. Theleftorium (talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Various other ref. are also missing publishers
 * See above. Theleftorium (talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)


 * External links
 * Add "television" portal in that box
 * Why? It adds nothing to this article and would cause a whitespace at the bottom of the article. Theleftorium (talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Add TV.com link for the episode
 * Categories should be in alphabetical order please.

Good work. On hold for now. TBrandley 19:47, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! I have fixed everything except for the stuff I have commented on. Theleftorium (talk) 20:09, 8 August 2012 (UTC)