Talk:Growling/Archive 1

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Potential sources for expansion Below is a list of sources i will begin working on combing through as to further develop my article. -http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1111/j.1439-0310.2009.01681.x/full -http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1111/j.1095-8649.2000.tb02200.x/full -http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1002/jez.1402600302/full -http://www.sciencedirect.com.qe2a-proxy.mun.ca/science/article/pii/S0168159113001871 -http://www.cliniciansbrief.com/sites/default/files/attachments/Growling%20in%20Dogs.pdf — Preceding unsigned comment added by DeonDischer (talk • contribs) 17:12, 9 October 2017 (UTC)

Peer Review- Well thought out content and much of the introduction flows better. However, just be careful for run on sentences using misplaced commas and be sure to add in a few more sources. As well, maybe consider adding some more description of growling in fish in addition to the canine section? Jft436 (talk) 15:29, 26 October 2017 (UTC)Jft436

Response by DevonDischer - Thanks for your feedback! I will definitely continue to revise my article so it flows better, and will be sure to add resources as I continue to edit. Will also continue to add to my article sections.