Talk:Gubben Noak/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 17:27, 18 June 2022 (UTC)

Placeholder. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:27, 18 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Many thanks, I'll respond promptly to your comments. Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:37, 18 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Glad to hear! However, wait until I put the review on hold. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:47, 18 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead
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 * By 1766, probably earlier → 1766, probably earlier
 * Done.
 * Most likely by Bellman himself → Bellman
 * Done.
 * Composed: by 1766 → 1766
 * Done.
 * The song is possibly the best known of all Bellman's works. → source?
 * Added.
 * One paragraph
 * Closed up.
 * The information backed by both sources needs also to be mentioned in the body of the article, once done remove the source from here.
 * Done.
 * Add to the lead the simplified and more innocent versions sung by children, as well as the recorded English versions of the song
 * Done.

Context
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 * At the same time as depicting this reality, Bellman creates a Rococo picture of life, full of classical allusion, following the French post-Baroque poets; the women, including the beautiful Ulla Winblad, are "nymphs", and Neptune's festive troop of followers and sea-creatures sport in Stockholm's waters → can you split this sentence into two?

Music and verse form

 * Sample needs to comply with Manual of Style/Music samples
 * Music is out of copyright (PD is tagged) so length and similar considerations are not an issue.
 * You are indeed correct, sorry I'm used to work with more recent songs. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:41, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

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 * Add text to the audio sample to justify usage
 * Added description field to sample.
 * Wikilink rhyming scheme

Lyrics
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 * Remove the image, there is nothing said there that can't be said in the article
 * Done.
 * Wikilink Fredman to Jean Fredman
 * Linked.
 * on the mountains of Ararat, and as mentioned in → on the mountains of Ararat. As mentioned in
 * Done.
 * No source backing up all this description
 * Citation added.
 * "Gubben Noak is one of the biblical travesties that made Bellman popular during the 1760s" → the source only backs up the lyrics
 * Ref Lönnroth added.

Distribution
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 * Being somewhat afraid of the church, Bellman chose to first publish the song anonymously on broadsheets throughout the country; although it was generally known at the time who had composed the extremely popular song. → source?
 * Edited; citation added.

Overall

 * Source check: 2, 3, 4, 7, 9, 11, 12, 14 and Old boy noah
 * Noted.
 * On hold, let me know once you are done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:16, 19 June 2022 (UTC)
 * , many thanks for the very useful comments. I believe I've covered everything now. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:54, 19 June 2022 (UTC)
 * I made some minor changes to the article, see if you are ok with those and you forgot to do some stuff. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:45, 19 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Many thanks. Added a ref. Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:55, 19 June 2022 (UTC)