Talk:Guilty as Sin?/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 14:06, 11 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Heartfox (talk · contribs) 17:08, 10 July 2024 (UTC)


 * "showing that the narrator is aware of how the public perceives her for this fling" → a little informal
 * Done. Ippantekina (talk) 09:53, 17 July 2024 (UTC)


 * "The song features a reference to the Scottish band the Blue Nile..." → what is the reference?
 * Done. Ippantekina (talk) 09:53, 17 July 2024 (UTC)


 * "Within ten days of the album's release, the vinyl stock of all four of the Blue Nile's albums were sold out on their website" → this might be unnecessary detail
 * Trimmed. I didn't remove it altogether as this demonstrates the song's impact on the subject of the reference. Ippantekina (talk) 09:53, 17 July 2024 (UTC)


 * "SLUG Magazine's Palak Jayswal named it one of the album's best songs" → wrong citation given
 * Removed. Ippantekina (talk) 09:53, 17 July 2024 (UTC)


 * "and Anna Leszkiewicz similarly picked it as a "couple of bright pop tracks shine through the fog"" → who is Anna Leszkiewicz; this isn't grammatically correct
 * done. Ippantekina (talk) 09:19, 17 July 2024 (UTC)

Heartfox (talk) 17:08, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
 * the studios and track length are given in the infobox but not the body


 * Hi, I believe all is done now. Thanks for the review! Ippantekina (talk) 13:16, 17 July 2024 (UTC)
 * nudge-- Ippantekina (talk) 13:45, 19 July 2024 (UTC)
 * passed. If you have time my current FAC would benefit from your insight! Thx, Heartfox (talk) 18:10, 19 July 2024 (UTC)