Talk:Guitar Hero: On Tour (video game)/GA1

GA Review
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Images seem fine and correctly tagged, neutrality is not an issue, article is well-written and broad in scope. Put on hold for a couple of small requests:


 * The first citation, Console Hero, is missing the author details etc.
 * Under development: "..it took nearly a year to figure out.." could you replace 'figure out' with something less casual, like 'find', 'develop' or 'discover'?
 * Ditto: "allowing it to be easily taken on the road." 'taken on the road' sounds like it's caught up in the whole touring thing, could you reword that?
 * There are some tiny or sentence-long paragraphs hanging under the development heading, particularly in the subheadings, please merge them into larger paragraphs.
 * The two subheadings under development contain very little detail, would you consider renaming the development heading to 'development and release', dropping the subheaders? They're a pet-hate, breaking up the text flow.
 * Could you remove the defunct link to the soundtrack list (which is now merged here) and collapse the track-listing into a bar? (IE it's a coloured bar until the reader clicks on the 'show' tag).
 * The images are pretty bunched up, could you try and stagger them some?

That's it, very easy article to review and nothing to pick at. Someoneanother 20:25, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
 * I've corrected every except collapsing the table - I know from working on the other GH and Rock Band articles that users are coming to see that information, and hiding it may be detrimental. (If it were simply a background music soundtrack, I'd be all for collapsing it, but the songs are the meat of the game) If this is a major problem, let's figure out a solution. --M ASEM  23:43, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Unless it's something pretty much vital (IE sourcing issues, reliability, NPOV etc) I am very happy to defer, I throw the idea out there and the response is either "yeah, actually I agree" or "no, because..", it's been discussed either way. On Tour is now a Good Article, thank you for your work. Someoneanother 00:21, 30 July 2008 (UTC)