Talk:Gummy Song Fetus

Neutrality
The entire "Tracklist Summary" reads like one big advertisement, with the promotional tone, buzzwords and everything. Please review WP:NPOV. :)  Salvidrim!   05:00, 19 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Edits to the Gummy Song Fetus page have been made. I believe they meet Wikipedia standards now. TheMikeBlackSpecial (talk) 17:43, 20 April 2012 (UTC)
 * No. You're expressing a judgement on the songs (calling them nostalgic, etc.). That's WP:OR; if sources describe them as such, then the situation is different. But still, using those buzzwords (quasi-bluegrass, psychedelic drone, organ fuzz) is highly frowned upon. This is not a promotional flyer nor a press release.  Salvidrim!   18:00, 20 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Ok, revisions failed, so section deleted. I just felt the genre/style of songs would be not only relevant but desirable to readers who even come across this tiny page. TheMikeBlackSpecial (talk) 17:56, 30 April 2012 (UTC)