Talk:Gunther E. Rothenberg/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk) 20:05, 26 July 2010 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * I'm assuming that the Villa de Madrid is a passenger ship of some sort, but can you clarify please?
 * "Rothenberg completed with a bachelor's degree from" doesn't sound right to me. Maybe graduated or something similar instead of completed (or, this could just be a phrase I don't run into writing my Kaiserliche Marine articles ;)
 * fixed.
 * You should specify what his muzzle-loaders were. Many people would probably know what you're talking about, but many would not.
 * I believe keynote is one word (the last paragraph in the Education & Career section).
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * This edit by another editor needs to be either sourced or removed (more than likely just reverted, given the peacock-ery going on there).
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * See the diff linked above.
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Are there no pictures available? Since he passed away in 2004, a copyrighted photo of him would qualify for Fair Use. If you can't find a photo, that's no big deal though.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Excellent work on this article, Ruth. There are just a few things that need to be ironed out before I'll pass the article for GA. Parsecboy (talk) 20:05, 26 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Excellent work on this article, Ruth. There are just a few things that need to be ironed out before I'll pass the article for GA. Parsecboy (talk) 20:05, 26 July 2010 (UTC)