Talk:Guto Puw/GA1

GA Reassessment
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Starting GA reassessment as part of the GA Sweeps process. Jezhotwells (talk) 17:14, 8 January 2010 (UTC)

Checking against GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * Biography: Seven sentences in this section start with the word He. Best to vary to eliminate this sort of repetition.
 * Music: Two sentences starting Many of his compositions ...
 * Lead: A gain repetitive phrasing - the lead should fully summarise the whole article, i don't think it quite does this at present.
 * Overall, I recommend a thorough copy-edit to improve the prose and make it flow better.
 * I would further recommend a separate Awards section to include awards and nominations, and re-organising the Music section, perhaps sub-dividing to make it more readable.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * The references could do with formatting using templates such as cite news and cite web
 * ref #1 is a dead link;  ref #4I note the source names John Metcalf but you have John Metcalfe?;  ref #5 doesn't say that he is the  the Welsh Medium Teaching Fellow for the School of Music; ref #7  is just a search page; ref #8  just returns an empty page; ref #15  failed verification; ref #17  is a dead link; ref #19 is a dead link;
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * No images are used, but I recommend searching for an image - not a GA requirement however.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * On hold for seven days for these issues to be addressed. Major contributors and projects will be informed.Jezhotwells (talk) 18:12, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, I think the issues have been fixed now, so I am happy for this artcile to reatin its GA status, thanks for your hard work.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * On hold for seven days for these issues to be addressed. Major contributors and projects will be informed.Jezhotwells (talk) 18:12, 8 January 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, I think the issues have been fixed now, so I am happy for this artcile to reatin its GA status, thanks for your hard work.

More to come, no doubt. BencherliteTalk 13:16, 12 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Progress
 * has been addressing the prose, thankfully.
 * I've made a start on the deadlinks etc.
 * I can't find any free-use images of Puw, having had another look.