Talk:Guy Berryman/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kj cheetham (talk · contribs) 10:06, 28 August 2023 (UTC)

Starting review. -Kj cheetham (talk) 10:06, 28 August 2023 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * No copyvio issues, Earwig only flags up quotes.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * Seems stable.
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Images ok, with captions and seemingly proper licenses.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Images ok, with captions and seemingly proper licenses.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Initial grammar suggestions, not including Oxford commas suggestions:
 * "In 2020, he launched fashion label Applied Art Forms, being inspired by" to "In 2020, he launched the fashion label Applied Art Forms, inspired by"
 * "born on 12 April 1978 in Kirkcaldy, Fife, Scotland, being the" to "born on 12 April 1978 in Kirkcaldy, Fife, Scotland. He was the"
 * "He grew a passion" to "He developed a passion"
 * "dropped out his original degree" to "dropped out of his original degree"
 * "they said while Buckland is usually more optimistic" to "they said that while Buckland is usually more optimistic"
 * "Berryman tends is more critical" to "Berryman tends to be more critical"
 * "appeared at CTM Festival" to "appeared at the CTM Festival"
 * "bassist also added his focus" to "bassist also added that his focus"
 * "Applied Art Forms does occasional updates" to "Applied Art Forms makes occasional updates"
 * "Blood Red Rose's debut album Pray to Be Free" to "Blood Red Rose's debut album, Pray to Be Free"
 * "After six years of relationship" to "After six years of dating" (or similar?)

I'll do a read through and check sourcing soon. -Kj cheetham (talk) 17:49, 29 August 2023 (UTC)


 * All fixed! GustavoCza (talk • contribs) 21:38, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

, I read through all the sections, and nothing to add really, it seems well written! Nothing I spotted that should have had a reference but didn't. Not refs in the Discography section, but not sure if any are needed?

Sources spot-checking a random-ish selection:
 * [5] ok
 * [7] ok
 * [8] ok
 * [11] ok
 * [19] ok
 * [21] ok
 * [24] amazon link - is there a better ref for this?
 * [27] ok
 * [29] ok
 * [31] ok
 * [34] ok
 * [40] ok
 * [44] ok
 * [48] the source is from 2003, so sure his equipment still includes those items? Maybe better to say "In 2003, this equipment included..." or similar?
 * [54] ok
 * [55] source is from 2021, so not sure should say "currently". Also see MOS:CURRENTLY.
 * [56] ok

This is very close to passing, but I'll leave it on hold for a bit for you to respond to the above. -Kj cheetham (talk) 19:02, 31 August 2023 (UTC)


 * [24] This website from 2012 says the album was released in the previous month, it should do the trick.
 * [48] Solved.
 * [55] Solved. But just out of curitosity, he still lives there and it's a very pretty house! GustavoCza (talk • contribs) 19:12, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
 * All looks good to me now, so this is a pass. That's definitely a house I could only dream of! -Kj cheetham (talk) 19:19, 31 August 2023 (UTC)