Talk:H&R Block/Archives/2021

Request to update Business areas
Hi there! On behalf of H&R Block (via their PR agency, Ketchum, as part of my work at Beutler Ink), I'm back with another request. This article is tagged as reading like an advertisement, so I am preparing drafts of sections to bring them up-to-date, add proper citations, and remove unnecessary detail. I'll start with Business areas: the live section is very outdated as Retail tax services relies on info that is 11 years old, Digital tax service is entirely unsourced, and H&R Block Bank is misleading, as this is a former business area of H&R Block. I should also mention that the existing Block Advisors section is unnecessary, as detail on that business area belongs in Business areas.

You can find my draft below, along with the markup, and references. This is intended to replace the existing Business areas and Block Advisors sections. The updates that I am proposing are:
 * Combining Retail tax services and Digital tax services into one subsection called Retail and digital tax services
 * This includes up-to-date figures for the number of tax pros, retail locations, and tax returns filed in 2016
 * Updating information on H&R Block's digital tax service offerings, and citations
 * Making Block Advisors a subsection of Business areas, included a sentence about certifications of its advisors, and a citation
 * Adding a Partnerships subsection that includes recent business partnerships with Walmart, Amazon.com, IBM Watson, and Lending Tree, in addition to citations for each
 * Adding a subsection called Other products and services to include H&R Block's Expat Tax Services and other financial services
 * Moving the info on H&R Block Bank to a new subsection called Former business areas. I also changed the verb tense to past tense and deleted outdated information since this is no longer a business area of H&R Block

Since I do have a financial conflict of interest, I won't edit the article myself and am looking for an uninvolved editors to review and make changes as appropriate. Whoisjohngalt: Would you like to review this request as well? Thanks in advance! 16912 Rhiannon (Talk &middot; COI) 13:44, 18 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much to Whoisjohngalt for reviewing and making these edits, the close review is much appreciated. 16912 Rhiannon (Talk &middot; COI) 16:33, 23 May 2018 (UTC)