Talk:Héctor Valdez Albizu

Hector Valdez Albizu
The article may or may not be grammatically correct; however, the information is presented in an unclear and abstract way. There is also a very passive and round about style associated with the writing of this article. Does anyone agree with me or have any further comments regarding this issue? Patbaseball2221 23:42, 19 July 2006 (UTC)