Talk:Hôtel d'Alluye/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 11:25, 16 August 2015 (UTC)

Hi. I am Calvin999 and I am reviewing this nomination. — Calvin999 18:32, 19 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Alphabetise the Architectural styles in the info box
 * The hôtel d'Alluye is → Shouldn't hotel be capitalised?
 * Link Rue Saint-Honoré
 * it is now significantly smaller than it was originally. → Why?
 * of Gothic and French and Italian Renaissance architecture. → of Gothic, French Renaissance and Italian Renaissance architecture.
 * for many years → how many?
 * Link Rue Saint-Honoré again in the Location section.
 * extended to Rue Beauvoir in 1643, extending → Slightly repetitive, extended... extending.
 * However, it is → 'Although' seems more fitting here
 * Link Louis XII in the construction section
 * described the hôtel as → So is it a hotel or a townhouse? If it's the former, I don't think the ô
 * architecture. Its architecture → Repetition
 * The Construction section could be just one paragraph instead of being split in two.
 * In 1588 it hosted → Comma after 1588
 * I'm not entirely convinced that you need four titled sub-sections. There's only a few lines in each of them.
 * In 2007 the residence → Comma after 2007
 * Similarly, I don't think the Entrances section warrants being a stand alone section. It could be merged elsewhere.

On hold for 7 days. — Calvin999 18:59, 19 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Outcome


 * I believe that I've made the necessary changes. With regards to the point on described the hôtel as, I believe that "hôtel" is in its correct form as the building is a hôtel particulier, as in, a grand townhouse. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 20:25, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks, passing. — Calvin999  20:28, 21 August 2015 (UTC)