Talk:Höchsterwünschtes Freudenfest, BWV 194/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yash! (talk · contribs) 08:22, 14 May 2016 (UTC)

Sure!  Ya  sh  !   08:22, 14 May 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * Avoid the repetition of "again" in the last sentence.
 * Use '(1647)' and '(1630)' here as well.

History

 * Mention Bach's full name the first time he is mentioned in the prose.
 * Perhaps mention that he composed the cantata in Leipzig.
 * Link Köthen.
 * Remove "certainly" and if you'd like, use something such as "according to.." or perhaps simply remove "certainly".
 * Rather than "for the 1723 occasion", use the "for the event" or something.
 * "John Eliot Gardiner and other scholars" - may I suggest an alternative? "Scholars such as John Eliot Gardiner".
 * "in the dedication service" -> "at the dedication service".

Music

 * "often dance-like" - could there be a more formal explanation or maybe use something from the source in "quotation".

A short and nice article. This should do it. Cheers,  Ya  sh  !   13:02, 19 May 2016 (UTC)
 * All addressed except the last point - the character of the music is dance-like, not sure what else you would say there. Nikkimaria (talk) 18:40, 19 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Fair enough. Passing it, great work!  Ya  sh  !   03:27, 20 May 2016 (UTC)