Talk:Hör klockorna med ängsligt dån/GA1

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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 21:26, 18 September 2022 (UTC)

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 21:26, 18 September 2022 (UTC)

Images are appropriately tagged. I haven't seen a rendered midi file before but the tag seems right. Earwig finds no issues; sources are reliable. Spotchecks -- some sources are unavailable so the choice here is limited: More later, probably tomorrow. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 21:56, 18 September 2022 (UTC)
 * FN 2 cites "The juxtaposition of elegant and low life is humorous, sometimes burlesque, but always graceful and sympathetic". The source is quite long; the closest I can find to this is "Ancient and Christian mythology and Swedish drinking figures, not only from Stockholm, were brought together into a both learned and burlesque, rather bizarre whole, one of the strangest works that Swedish literature has to offer." which is not a very precise match.  Am I missing the relevant passage?
 * I think you have it; I've added another ref to Britten Austin 1967, with quotation, which certainly fills it out a bit more. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:27, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
 * FN 2 also cites "A solo entertainer, he played the cittern, accompanying himself as he performed his songs at the royal court" -- can you point me at the passage in the source that supports this?
 * Added a ref. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:16, 19 September 2022 (UTC)


 * We have "Fredmans sånger" in the lead, but "Fredman's Songs" in the body. I would think the English is probably the better option since this is not a widely known title.
 * Fixed.


 * "At the same time as depicting this reality": I think "reality" is not the word we want here, as it is no less fictional than the nymphs.
 * Reworded.


 * I think "Rococo" should be lower case.
 * Done.


 * "when he wrote his famous diary entry": suggest "a" rather than "his".
 * Done.


 * Are there any notable modern recordings? Is it a regular part of the modern repertoire?
 * Added two recordings. It seems to be less usual in the modern repertoire.

-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 10:44, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Fixes look good; passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 15:28, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
 * I put it in Music rather than Languages and literature, but feel free to move it if you think that's incorrect. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 15:31, 19 September 2022 (UTC)