Talk:H.A.T.E.U./GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:39, 3 October 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:39, 3 October 2015 (UTC)
 * When you're ready. — Calvin999  11:04, 9 October 2015 (UTC)


 * No DABs.
 * External links good.
 * The background section doesn't really cover the background, but rather the performance. Is there any info on the origin of the song or why she decided to do it?
 * I've re-titled it as Production. — Calvin999  19:04, 10 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Copyright 2009 Rye Songs which is administered by Songs of Universal (BMI)/WB Music Publishing (ASCAP/Songs of Peer/March 9 Publishing (ASCAP). Why is this here?
 * We tend to include management and publishing info now. — Calvin999  19:04, 10 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Really? No such info in your recent GA for Infinity.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:38, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * That isn't now. I can remove it if you want. But I've noticed that other editors are including it now. — Calvin999  21:07, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * albums initial release Missing possessive apostrophe.
 * Added. — Calvin999  19:04, 10 October 2015 (UTC)
 * and here: the albums third single and there are later examples as well.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:38, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * A low quality snippet Add a hyphen between low and quality. More later.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:01, 10 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Added. — Calvin999  19:04, 10 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Was it released or did it chart outside the US? If so, add that info.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:38, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * It wasn't and didn't, else I would have added that info. — Calvin999  10:08, 13 October 2015 (UTC)

Any chance of this progressing please? — Calvin999 21:30, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

Left this on behalf of review's request. <b style="color:#454545">Snuggums</b> (<b style="color:#454545">talk</b> / <b style="color:#454545">edits</b>) 00:15, 18 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Non-reviewer comments
 * "described the song as 'notable'" isn't really informative. I'd mention that Fekadu called the song as "a beautiful heartbreak ballad"
 * "was critical of Carey's vocal performance" → "criticized Carey's vocals"
 * It could help to add some critical commentary on the performances as the "live performances" section is quite short
 * There isn't any. I couldn't even source other Live performances. It was a very minimal promoted, charted and commented on single. — <b style="color:#595454">Calvin999</b>
 * Not really sure a "charts" section is really warranted with only one entry, but is definitely worth discussing in prose within the "Release and remixes" section either way.
 * I opted for a table over prose. — <b style="color:#595454">Calvin999</b>  19:19, 18 October 2015 (UTC)