Talk:H. Donald Wilson

Essay-ish
Article seems, on a n initial look, a bit essay-ish and should be slightly more structured like other biographies. See also: WP:BIO and WikiProject Biography for additional guidlines and possible help.  Jaakobou Chalk Talk  18:11, 1 August 2008 (UTC)

What's in a name
Anybody knows the full name of this chap? The "H" doesn't really make me comfortable.  Jaakobou Chalk Talk  07:27, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

copyedit
I did a preliminary copyedit, removing considerable duplication--probably from the various sources paraphrased. It really needs a rather thorough rewrite.  DGG ( talk ) 21:27, 18 May 2012 (UTC)