Talk:H/PJ-38 130mm naval gun

The lead section of this article presents some valuable information on the topic but seems to be worded in an odd fashion. This section also does not provide much background information on the topic. The content of the article is up-to-date and contains information that is relevant to the topic. The article maintains a neutral tone and does not appear to contain any biases. The sources presented in the article do not all work, so the credibility of these sources, and the content taken from them, cannot be evaluated. This article could use more citations the help to build up more background on the topic. The article did appear to have some grammatical errors. This article could definitely benefit from the use of images to help the reader depict the naval ship and the guns on it. There are not yet any discussions on the articles talk page going yet. The article is a part of the wikiproject China as well as the military history wikiproject and has been rated as a start-class by both.

Overall, this article could use some work and is currently in an undeveloped state. The article needs to include more background information on the topic as well as related information, such as the munitions used. The article would greatly benefit from some visuals to help the reader understand the topic as well as make it more appealing to the viewers. Starvin Bandit (talk) 00:46, 27 March 2022 (UTC)Starvin Bandit