Talk:HMS Ajax (1912)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 19:26, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

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Prose suggestions

 * "King George V class was powered by two sets of Parsons direct-drive steam turbines, " perhaps "ships of the King George V class were powered by two sets of Parsons direct-drive steam turbines," or else simply the King George Vs were powered by two sets of Parsons direct-drive steam turbines.
 * "By April 1917, the 4-inch guns had been removed from the hull casemates as they were frequently unusable in heavy seas." Might wish to add in salutary in front of "4 inch guns".
 * They weren't saluting guns.
 * "and was reduced to reserve" perhaps "and was put into the reserve fleet".
 * "Placed in" works better, IMO.
 * That's all my suggestions. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  02:45, 30 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:52, 30 March 2017 (UTC)