Talk:HMS Andromeda (1897)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 14:04, 1 May 2016 (UTC)


 * "The the first "
 * Sigh.
 * "Their complement" -this a formal term I gather?
 * Complement and crew are pretty much synonymous.
 * "later that month to Portsmouth Dockyard for completion. Upon completion on 5 September 1899," -rep of completion
 * Agreed.
 * "4 March 1902,[11] and from 11 June that year Andromeda served as flagship to Rear-Admiral Sir Baldwin Wake Walker, commander of the Cruiser Division of the Mediterranean Fleet.[12] In May 1902" -probably don't need to repeat "1902"
 * Indeed. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:37, 1 May 2016 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: ♦ Dr. Blofeld  16:59, 1 May 2016 (UTC)