Talk:HMS Anson (1886)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 11:43, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

I'll do this within a couple of hours. JAG UAR   11:43, 11 April 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

 * I feel that the lead could be expanded slightly, to summarise the article according to WP:LEADLENGTH. A sentence or two on its career should do it
 * "Howe recommissioned for the Home Fleet in early 1901" - how is this part relevant to the lead section or HMS Anson? Did Howe's recommissioning have some consequence for this ship?
 * "The ship was paid off in three years later" - just three years later
 * "their draught increased by another 6 inches" - convert to metric
 * All measurements are converted on first use only.
 * "by armoured tubes with walls 12 inches thick" - convert to metric
 * "She returned home and paid off at Devonport" - link Ship decommissioning
 * Linked in the lede.
 * No dead links
 * No dab links

Another short one. Just minor stuff this time, but once all are addressed then this should be good to go. JAG UAR   11:53, 11 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for catching these nits.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:10, 11 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for addressing them. Promoted.  JAG  UAR   19:38, 11 April 2016 (UTC)