Talk:HMS Bellona (1909)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 21:06, 1 May 2016 (UTC)

Will do ASAP. JAG UAR   21:06, 1 May 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

 * "The ship served as the flotilla leader for the 2nd Destroyer Flotilla" - I recommend removing this red link
 * "Bellona spent the bulk of World War I with the squadron" - the 1st Battle Squadron?
 * Clarified.
 * "Her conning tower was protected by four inches of armour" - convert to metric
 * "As a scout cruiser, the ship was only lightly protected to maximize her speed" - maximise
 * "On 17 December 1914, Bellona collided with the destroyer leader Broke" - why is the HMS prefix missing?
 * I generally save the prefix for when a ship is operating in a group of mixed nationalities.
 * No dead links
 * No dab links

Minor nitpicking stuff, but this will pass once they are all out of the way  JAG  UAR   21:16, 1 May 2016 (UTC) Thanks for reviewing this. It's been a pleasure working with you.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:58, 1 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for addressing them. You too! With all of those done, I'll pass this. JAG  UAR   22:42, 1 May 2016 (UTC)