Talk:HMS Benbow (1913)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 21:34, 26 February 2017 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:34, 26 February 2017 (UTC)
 * One DAB, external links OK
 * Will have to address that later - for some reason, the dablink checker is blocked at work.
 * is what you're looking for, IIRC. Choose the digit for all the usual sclass- options.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:07, 8 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Ah, yes, missing the extra pipe. Thanks.
 * Images appropriately licensed. Can you find a decent one to illustrate her late- or post-war appearance?
 * Nothing on the USN's site, but the IWM has this one that should be usable. Only from 1917 though.
 * Better than nothing.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:07, 8 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Will get to this tonight or tomorrow morning - the photo is kind of fuzzy so I might try to clean it up a bit before I upload it. Parsecboy (talk) 21:21, 8 March 2017 (UTC)
 * No rush.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:38, 8 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Uploaded and added to the article. Parsecboy (talk) 23:10, 8 March 2017 (UTC)
 * No duplicate links
 * Work the COs into the main body.
 * Done
 * Fix the appendicies to conform with MOS:APPENDIX
 * Done, I think
 * Link decommissioned, scrap, displaced, main battery, funnels, secondary battery, AA guns, magazines, salvo, flying-off ramp
 * Done all but flying-off ramp - do we have an article for that?
 * Flying-off platforms
 * Thanks
 * The four Iron Duke-class battleships were ordered in the 1911 building programme, and were an incremental improvement over the preceding King George V class, the primary change being the substitution of a heavier secondary battery. Might be worth splitting in half.
 * Done
 * combat loading? Howzabout deep load with a link?
 * Done
 * one forward and one aft; of what?
 * Clarified
 * machinery spaces What kind of machinery
 * Clarified
 * The typical routine of gunnery drills and squadron exercises occurred in January. awkward
 * See how it's worded now
 * Tell the reader the turret designations, so they'll be able to figure out which turrets got the flying-off platforms and watch the hyphenation
 * Done
 * 21 in (530 mm) I think you know what to do with this!
 * Indeed
 * Which of Burt's books are you using?
 * Moved the other one to Further reading
 * What's your source for the Xth ship of her name in the RN?
 * Hadn't thought to look one up, but added now.
 * Watch your ampersands in the refs.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:24, 8 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Thanks again. Parsecboy (talk) 19:17, 8 March 2017 (UTC)