Talk:HMS Blanche (1909)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 21:06, 1 May 2016 (UTC)

Will do ASAP. JAG UAR   21:06, 1 May 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

 * I would recommend removing all red links from the lead, but I'll leave that up to you
 * One of these days, I'll start those articles.
 * The lead summarises the article well, so no issues there
 * "Her conning tower was protected by four inches of armour" - convert to metric
 * Converted in the armament section.
 * "She was still assigned to the 3rd Battle Squadron of the Grand Fleet in Scapa Flow at the start of the war" - World War I
 * "As a scout cruiser, the ship was only lightly protected to maximize her speed" - maximise
 * I think that my subconscious leaves these in so you have something to comment on, sigh.
 * No dead links
 * No dab links
 * Ref 6 needs filling out
 * I'd love to, but I don't have access to the archive.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:52, 1 May 2016 (UTC)

Excellent work once again. Once all of the above are done this will pass. JAG UAR   21:13, 1 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for looking this over. BTW, I finally remembered that tonne is the British spelling of what Americans call metric tons, and all those usages have been abbreviations so they never made an appearance.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:52, 1 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for addressing them, and the "tonnes" confusion! Without any further ado, promoted  JAG  UAR   22:43, 1 May 2016 (UTC)