Talk:HMS Brazen (H80)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 21:12, 8 December 2011 (UTC)


 * Dabs and external links are good (no action required)
 * In "description" it might be worthy to note how the ship design deviated from the typical B-class destroyer as a frame of reference. Even if it was an exact specification of the class, just say so.
 * Why? This is unnecessary as I've presented her info as provided by my sources. If she varied significantly, I'd have mentioned it.
 * "The ship was ordered on 22 March 1929 from Palmers Shipbuilding and Iron Company at Hebburn under the 1928 Naval Programme" - is there a link to this program? If not, add a sentence or two explaining what it was (I assume it was a naval expansion plan)
 * Linked, it was the annual shipbuilding authorization.
 * "The ship received a refit at Devonport from August to October 1933 and another at Malta a few months later." - any idea the nature of these refits?
 * Nope, just the standard sort of things.
 * Also, any idea of the number of convoys the ship escorted in the war?
 * No, that sort of detailed data isn't available for the coastal convoys.
 * Will check back soon. — Ed! (talk) 21:18, 8 December 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:25, 10 December 2011 (UTC)