Talk:HMS Bridgewater (L01)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 00:34, 16 September 2016 (UTC)

Well constructed, will get back shortly. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 00:34, 16 September 2016 (UTC)

Section 1

 * Para 3; Please reconsider the uses of commas in the first sentence. Presently, it reads "... shipyard on 6 February 1928 and was launched, without ceremony, on 14 September 1928" I advice ... shipyard on 6 February 1928, and was launched without ceremony on 14 September 1928, because omitting them doesn't change the meaning and moreover many of them makes the reader confused.
 * Para 4; In the latter of the last sentence, please consider adding "was" before "increased". So it reads .....the depth charge outfit was increased to 15 charges.

Section 2

 * Para 2; The sentence "Bridgewater had her second high-angle, four-inch gun installed during a refit there that was interrupted by the Munich Crisis of September 1938 when she was ordered to Freetown, Sierra Leone" is a bit confusing. As far I know, "high-angle four-inch gun" is a single one, then what is the need of using a comma, and consider adding a comma after there (..ing a refit there, that was inter..)

All good, and well written. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 12:32, 16 September 2016 (UTC) Please address the issues. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 11:37, 29 September 2016 (UTC)

Apologies for my tardiness in responding to your comments. They were good ones, although I broke the sentence in your second point in half to improve readability. See how it reads now.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:40, 8 October 2016 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 01:59, 11 October 2016 (UTC)
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