Talk:HMS Canopus (1897)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 14:35, 7 September 2017 (UTC)

I'll take this one. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  14:35, 7 September 2017 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅
 * No DAB links ✅
 * No Dead links ✅
 * Images appropriately licensed ✅

Prose Suggestions

 * "After the war, the ship was broken up in 1920." For almost all the article, Canopus is referred to by name or as "her"; the use of "the ship" is understandable in other places except here;
 * "The ship was launched on 12 October 1897," And here.
 * " four 18-inch (460 mm) submerged torpedo tubes submerged in the hull." It seems a little redundant to say submerged twice, but it's your call if you want to remove it.
 * That is all my prose suggestions; as the article meets all criteria already, I will be immediately passing it. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  14:46, 7 September 2017 (UTC)