Talk:HMS Crocus (1808)

assessment
this suffers from the same problems as your other articles on the brig-sloops. Too much jargon, the text does not flow and sometimes seems out of context, and many of the pronouns (she did this and she did that) are unclear, especially when there are two different "shes" in the same sentence. auntieruth (talk) 23:41, 12 December 2013 (UTC)
 * I assessed B5 as it was missing an assessment. As the article has an infobox I think this satisfies the criteria - kept the rest per previous assessment. Anotherclown (talk) 04:30, 3 January 2014 (UTC)