Talk:HMS Daring (H16)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Miyagawa   (talk)  17:14, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this article shortly. Miyagawa  (talk)  17:14, 12 July 2011 (UTC)


 * No dab issues.
 * All external links functioning.


 * Description: Was this the standard setup for a D class destroyer? Obviously you don't need to go into great detail and compare everything, but if there was any specific changes then that should be mentioned.
 * Yeah, this was the standard configuration for the class, although half had the 2x 2-pdrs and half had 2x quad .50-calibre MGs.
 * Career: I moved a reference to the next punctuation mark after HMS Wishart as it looked a bit lost in the middle of a sentence.
 * OK
 * Career: Although I agree that Otto Kretschmer is legendary, technically it's non neutral. Can you replace with something else?
 * Simplest to just delete it. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:32, 13 July 2011 (UTC)

Other than that, I think it's all good to go. Miyagawa  (talk)  17:25, 12 July 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Suitable references in place.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * Following that amendment, the article is now neutral in tone.
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * All stable.
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Image has appropriate licence.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * All in all a good job. Miyagawa   (talk)  11:58, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * All in all a good job. Miyagawa   (talk)  11:58, 13 July 2011 (UTC)